Feedback and Responses

After our pitch last week we got some teacher feedback, which I have a few ideas/responses to.

1. Setting too small for a struggle/fight scene: A simple punch to the face (rather than a lengthy struggle), knocking the Hacker out will be much quicker and much more suited to the setting.
2. Setting too difficult to dress up: I believe that our setting can be sorted out fine: all that needs to be moved is a few posters, and the wardrobe/cupboards can be covered up with some dark material. I really don't think we have a problem here.
3. The gunshot is a little unrealistic: I agree. This was originally included so that we could use the special effects, though (as said above) I think that the Agent just knocking the Hacker out with a punch will be much more realistic, not to mention much simpler.
4. Too much narrative for 2 mins: Looking back, I agree. My idea is that we base the entire 2 mins around the Hacker uncovering some information, maybe sending an email. Maybe the Agent just over complicates things. On the other hand, maybe we need a second character in order to create a conflict and a good/bad binary opposite.
5. We need to do some extra research into titles and the effects for the hacking sequence. 
6. Ditto with music.
7. The general film plot needs to be revised, and a clear plot structure decided: When coming up with our plot, we may have got a little carried away. I think if we just come up with a very simple narrative, with very clear good/bad characters, things will be much simpler.